Online Outline for: Paper 2
Part Culture, Part Tradition, and Total Community
Introductory Paragraph
"Every culture expresses its purposes and conducts its affairs through the medium of communication."(51) An affiliation with a certain community does not have a holding pattern on a persons life until that person ventures out into a different community and reflects on the community in which she/he came from.,
Body Paragraph #1
As children grow into adulthood the community influences she/he experience have an enduring effect on their lives.
Body Paragraph #2
Traditions and customs are ingrained into children as they experience being part of a family, neighborhood, and community. .
Body Paragraph #3
The most important reason As children grow into adulthood the community influences she/he experience has an enduring effect on their lives. is because A baby is born and immediately learns the traits of the community that she/he is raised. .
Conclusion
So you can see that although An affiliation with a certain community does not have a holding pattern on a persons life until that person ventures out into a different community and reflects on the community in which she/he came from., As children grow into adulthood the community influences she/he experience has an enduring effect on their lives. for two main reasons. First, Traditions and customs are ingrained into children as they experience being part of a family, neighborhood, and community. . But most importantly, A baby is born and immediately learns the traits of the community that she/he is raised.
Barnlund, Dean. "Communication in a Global Village". Literacies. 2nd ed. Ed. Terence Brunk et al. New York: Norton, 2000. 47-61
1 comment:
A very engaging title! I would revise the first cited sentence. It seems not to be strong enough and not directly related to the paper. As I understand well, the paper is mainly about children growing up in a certain community and how it affects their adult lives. But this citation focuses on “the medium of communication.” It is not bad, but maybe too general. Try to find something more concrete and engaging as your title. Also, paragraphs 1 and 3 seem to be a little bit similar in what they say which affects the conclusion. I would revise the main point of the 3rd paragraph or maybe rephrase it. Overall, interesting thesis and subject of discussion!
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